如何提升雅思寫(xiě)作水平之語(yǔ)法篇
想要雅思作文得高分,就要掌握好語(yǔ)法的內(nèi)容,下面小編給大家分享一個(gè)提高語(yǔ)法水平的干貨!
語(yǔ)法自測(cè)
我寫(xiě)了這么幾個(gè)句子,請(qǐng)各位看官自己找找錯(cuò)誤(數(shù)據(jù)隨意編的,請(qǐng)勿當(dāng)真~):??
1.?The?environment?has?been?damaged?severely,?we?need?to?protect?our?environment.???
2.?The?air?in?rural?areas?is?much?better?than?urban?areas.??
3.?There?are?two?people?sit?there?and?talk?with?each?other?happily.??
4.?It?is?benefit?to?people?if?they?could?persist?on?exercise.??
5.?Knowing?that?students?may?be?tempted?from?TV?programs,?it?is?important?that?students?should?be?supervised?by?parents?at?home.??
6.?Government?needs?to?protect?our?environment.??
7.?Teacher?salaries?rose?from?70%?in?1981?to?80%?in?2001.??
8,?The?number?of?married?Americans?reduced?from?100000?in?1922?to?50000?in?1930.??
9.?The?price?of?iPhone?reached?a?peak?which?is?3400?rmb?in?1990.???
答案?
1.?The?environment?has?been?damaged?severely,?we?need?to?protect?our?environment.???缺少and/so連接詞??
2.?The?air?in?rural?areas?is?much?better?than?urban?areas.???
比較對(duì)象錯(cuò)誤???應(yīng)該是....better?than?that?in?urban?areas.??
3.?There?are?two?people?sit?there?and?talk?with?each?other?happily.??
動(dòng)詞數(shù)量問(wèn)題(更深層次是非謂語(yǔ)錯(cuò)誤)???sit和talk都加ing???
4.?It?is?benefit?to?people?if?they?could?persist?on?exercise.???
最簡(jiǎn)單粗暴但是很多同學(xué)犯的錯(cuò)誤???benefit改成beneficial??????
5.?Knowing?that?students?may?be?tempted?from?TV?programs,?it?is?important?that?students?should?be?supervised?by?parents?at?home.???
邏輯主語(yǔ)的問(wèn)題,逗號(hào)的后面應(yīng)該改成???.......,?parents?need?to?supervise?students?at?home.??
6.?Government?needs?to?protect?our?environment.???government是可數(shù)名詞哦???
7.?Teacher?salaries?rose?from?40%?in?1981?to?50%?in?1991.???40%和50%后面各加一個(gè)of?the?total?school?spending(來(lái)源自劍8T2T1)???8,?The?number?of?married?Americans?reduced?from?100000?in?1922?to?50000?in?1930.???reduce表示的并不是具體數(shù)字的下降,改成簡(jiǎn)單的decline/decrease/drop即可??
9.?The?price?of?iPhone?reached?a?peak?which?is?3400?rmb?in?1990.???不要使用定從去描述句子,你可以用with連接?
腦袋里面暫時(shí)就想到了這九個(gè)小句子,如果你覺(jué)得可以輕松找到8個(gè)句子全部的語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤所在,那么理論上來(lái)說(shuō),你應(yīng)該是具備了6.5及6.5分以上分?jǐn)?shù)的語(yǔ)法水平,請(qǐng)注意我的措詞,僅僅是語(yǔ)法水平,但這個(gè)語(yǔ)法水平是必不可少的。如果有4~5個(gè)句子你可以比較輕松的找到問(wèn)題,那么6分的語(yǔ)法水平應(yīng)該是差不多的,這些問(wèn)題是找我批改的作文里面最容易出現(xiàn)的一些簡(jiǎn)單問(wèn)題(除了句子5稍微有一點(diǎn)點(diǎn)難),避免這些可以幫助寫(xiě)作6.5分以下的同學(xué)提高0.5分左右,當(dāng)然,還有單詞的拼寫(xiě)、可數(shù)or不可數(shù)(這個(gè)其實(shí)對(duì)我來(lái)說(shuō)也是煩死人=?=)以及主謂一致等小問(wèn)題,都要盡可能的避免。原來(lái)有個(gè)學(xué)生聽(tīng)了我的課,跑去跟助教說(shuō)“Panda老師說(shuō)了,語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤是沒(méi)關(guān)系的,錯(cuò)了也不減分!”我聽(tīng)到助教的反饋之后表示很無(wú)奈,因?yàn)槲业脑捠恰叭绻阍谝黄笞魑膐r一篇小作文里面犯的所有錯(cuò)誤控制在3~4個(gè),那么考官如果大發(fā)慈悲or眼神不太好,其實(shí)并不會(huì)減分”。我也發(fā)現(xiàn)有一些同學(xué)是只會(huì)聽(tīng)到對(duì)他們有利的話,至于是不是有條件or前提,他們不管=?=那么如果是要求7or7以上的寫(xiě)作分?jǐn)?shù),請(qǐng)你盡量保證整篇文章不要出現(xiàn)語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤吧親。
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