中考英語(yǔ)作文寫作指導(dǎo)
記敘文是記人敘事的文章，它主要是用于說(shuō)明事件的時(shí)間、背景、起因、過(guò)程及結(jié)果，即我們通常所說(shuō)的五個(gè)" W "，那么接下來(lái)給大家分享一些關(guān)于中考英語(yǔ)作文寫作指導(dǎo)，希望對(duì)大家有所幫助。
中考英語(yǔ)記敘文的特點(diǎn)
1. 敘述的人稱
英語(yǔ)的記敘文一般是以第一或第三人稱的角度來(lái)敘述的。用第一稱表示的是由敘述者親眼所見(jiàn)、親耳所聞的經(jīng)歷。它的優(yōu)點(diǎn)在于能把故事的情節(jié)通過(guò)"我"來(lái)傳達(dá)給讀者，使人讀后感到真實(shí)可信，如身臨其境。如：
The other day, I was driving along the street. Suddenly, a car lost its control and ran directly towards me fast. I was so frightened that I quickly turned to the left side. But it was too late. The car hit my bike and I fell off it.
用第三人稱敘述，優(yōu)點(diǎn)在于敘述者不受"我"活動(dòng)范圍以內(nèi)的人和事物的限制，而是通過(guò)作者與讀者之外的第三者，直接把故事中的情節(jié)展現(xiàn)在讀者面前，文章的客觀性很強(qiáng)。如：
Little Tom was going to school with an umbrella, for it was raining hard. On the way, he saw an old woman walking in the rain with nothing to cover. Tom went up to the old woman and wanted to share the umbrella with her, but he was too short. What could he do? Then he had a good idea.
2. 動(dòng)詞的時(shí)態(tài)
在記敘文中，記和敘都離不開動(dòng)詞。所以動(dòng)詞出現(xiàn)率最高，且富于變化。記敘文中用得最多的是動(dòng)詞的過(guò)去的，這是英語(yǔ)記敘文區(qū)別于漢語(yǔ)記敘文的關(guān)鍵之處。英語(yǔ)寫作的優(yōu)美之處就在于這些動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)的變化，正是這一點(diǎn)才使得所記、所敘有鮮活的動(dòng)態(tài)感、鮮明的層次感和立體感。
3. 敘述的順序
記敘一件事要有一定的順序。無(wú)論是順敘、倒敘、插敘還是補(bǔ)敘，都要讓讀者能弄清事情的來(lái)龍去脈。順敘最容易操作，較容易給讀者提供有關(guān)事情的空間和時(shí)間線索。但這種方法也容易使文章顯得平鋪直敘，讀起來(lái)平淡乏味。倒敘、插敘、補(bǔ)敘等敘述方法能有效地提高文章的結(jié)構(gòu)效果，讓所敘之事跌宕起伏，使讀者在閱讀時(shí)思維產(chǎn)生較大的跳躍，從而為文章所吸引，深入其中。但這些方法如果使用不當(dāng)，則容易弄巧成拙，使文章結(jié)構(gòu)散亂，頭緒不清，讓讀者不知所云。
4. 敘述的過(guò)渡
過(guò)渡在上下文中起著承上啟下、融會(huì)貫通的作用。過(guò)渡往往用在地點(diǎn)轉(zhuǎn)移或時(shí)間、事件轉(zhuǎn)換以及由概括說(shuō)明到具體敘述時(shí)。如：
In my summer holidays, I did a lot of things. Apart form doing my homework, reading an English novel, watching TV and doing some housework, I went on a trip to Qingdao. It is really a beautiful city. There are many places of interest to see. But what impressed me most was the sunrise.
The next morning I got up early. I was very happy because it was a fine day. By the time I got to the beach, the clouds on the horizon were turning red. In a little while, a small part of the sun was gradually appearing. The sun was very red, not shining. It rose slowly. At last it broke through the red clouds and jumped above the sea, just like a deep-red ball. At the same time the clouds and the sea water became red and bright.
What a moving and unforgettable scene!
5. 敘述與對(duì)話
引用故事情節(jié)中主要人物的對(duì)話是記敘文提高表現(xiàn)力的一種好方法。適當(dāng)?shù)赜弥苯右Z(yǔ)代替間接的主觀敘述，可以客觀生動(dòng)地反映人物的性格、品質(zhì)和心理狀態(tài)，使記敘生動(dòng)、有趣，使文章內(nèi)容更加充實(shí)、具體。試比較下面兩段的敘述效果：
I was in the kitchen, and I was cooking something. Suddenly I heard a loud noise from the front. I thought maybe someone was knocking the door. I asked who it was but I heard no reply. After a while I saw my cat running across the parlor. I realized it was the cat. I felt released.
這本來(lái)應(yīng)是一段故事性很強(qiáng)的文字，但經(jīng)作者這么一寫，就不那么吸引人了。原因是文中用的都是敘述模式，沒(méi)有人物語(yǔ)言，把"懸念"給沖淡了?？勺魅缦抡{(diào)整：
I was in the kitchen cooking something. "Crash!" a loud noise came from the front. Thinking someone was knocking at the door, I asked, "Who?" No reply. After a while, I saw my cat running across the parlor. "It's you." I said, quite released.
寫好記敘文的基本要領(lǐng)
1. 頭緒分明，脈絡(luò)清楚
寫好記敘文，首先要頭緒分明，脈絡(luò)清楚，明確文章要求寫什么。要對(duì)所寫的事件或人物進(jìn)行分析，弄清事件發(fā)生、發(fā)展一直到結(jié)束的整個(gè)過(guò)程，然后再收集選取素材。這些素材都應(yīng)該跟上述五個(gè)" W "和一個(gè)" H "有關(guān)。盡管不是每篇記敘文里都必須包括這些" W "和" H "，但動(dòng)筆之前，圍繞五個(gè)" W "和" H "進(jìn)行構(gòu)思是必不可少的。
2. 突出中心，詳略得當(dāng)
在文章的框架確定后，對(duì)支持故事的素材的選取是很關(guān)鍵的。選材要注意取舍，應(yīng)該從表現(xiàn)文章主題的需要出發(fā)，分清主次，定好詳略。要突出重點(diǎn)，詳寫細(xì)述那些能表現(xiàn)文章主題的重要情節(jié)，略寫粗述那么非關(guān)鍵的次要情節(jié)。面面俱到反而使情節(jié)羅列化，使人不得要領(lǐng)。這一點(diǎn)是寫好記敘文要解決的一個(gè)基本問(wèn)題，也需要一定的技巧。如：
One night a man came to our house and told me, "There is a family with eight children. They have not eaten for days." I took some food with me and went.
When I finally came to that family, I saw the faces of those little children disfigured (破壞外貌) by hunger. There was no sorrow or sadness in their faces, just the deep pain of hunger.
I gave the rice to the mother. She divided the rice in two, and went out, carrying half the rice. When she came back, I asked her, "Where did you go?" she gave me this simple answer, "To my neighbors - they are hungry also!"
3. 用活語(yǔ)言，準(zhǔn)確生動(dòng)
記敘文要用具體的事件和生動(dòng)的語(yǔ)言對(duì)人、事、物加以敘述。一篇好的記敘文的語(yǔ)言既要準(zhǔn)確、生動(dòng)，又要表現(xiàn)力強(qiáng)，這樣才能把人、事描寫得具體生動(dòng)，其可讀性才強(qiáng)。試比較下面一篇例文修改的前后效果。
原文：
One day Xiaoqiang was wandering away. He was soon lost among people and traffic. He could not find the way back home and started crying. Just then, two young students who were passing by found him standing alone in front of a shop and crying. They went up to Xiaoqiang and asked him what had happened. Xiaoqiang told them how he got lost and where he lived. The two students decided to take him home. Mother was pleased to see Xiaoqiang come back safe and sound. She invited the two students into the house and gave them some money, but they didn't take it. She served them with tea but they left.
修改后：
The other day, five-year-old Xiaoqiang left home alone and wandered happily in the street. After some time, he felt hungry so he wanted to go back home. But he found he was lost among the crowded people and heavy traffic. When he could not find the way home, he started and crying. Just then, two young students who were passing by from school found him sanding crying in front of a shop. They immediately went up to him.
"Little boy, why are you standing here crying?" they asked.
"I want Mom, I go home." said the boy, still crying.
"Don't worry, we'll send you home."
And they spent the next two hours looking for the boy's house. With the help of a policeman, they finally found it.
When the worried mother saw her son come back safe and sound, she was so thankful and she invited the students into her house. Gratefully, she offered them some money, saying it was a way to express her thanks, but the young students firmly refused it and left without even a cup of tea.
高中英語(yǔ)作文寫作技巧
強(qiáng)化語(yǔ)言規(guī)范性
除了加強(qiáng)語(yǔ)法教學(xué)外，我們始終秉承市教研室要求的“三課型五環(huán)節(jié)”的授課模式，注重學(xué)生平時(shí)基礎(chǔ)知識(shí)的積累，比如每天背誦五個(gè)句型好的句子，每天背誦一片經(jīng)典的范文。通過(guò)背誦這些基本的句子和范文，增加學(xué)生的知識(shí)儲(chǔ)備。這樣學(xué)生在寫作時(shí)就能有話說(shuō)，就能胸中有物，寫出好的作文。換句話說(shuō)，就是讓學(xué)生在學(xué)會(huì)創(chuàng)新之前先學(xué)會(huì)模仿語(yǔ)言。當(dāng)然我們學(xué)校不是簡(jiǎn)單的背誦每日五句和作文范文，而是要求學(xué)生同時(shí)呈現(xiàn)在書寫紙上，這樣既避免了學(xué)生一說(shuō)就會(huì)，一寫就錯(cuò)的毛病，同時(shí)還強(qiáng)化了學(xué)生的書寫能力。
強(qiáng)化書寫能力
在訓(xùn)練方面，我們也做了大量的工作。例如，備課組統(tǒng)一印制了書寫紙和書面表達(dá)作業(yè)紙，做到每天一練。通過(guò)日積月累，學(xué)生的書寫規(guī)范性有了很大的提高，學(xué)生的作文得分也因此水漲船高，從而反過(guò)來(lái)又激發(fā)了學(xué)生練字的熱情。此外，平時(shí)的單詞聽(tīng)寫我們不僅看學(xué)生寫的是否正確，書寫也是我們?cè)u(píng)判的一個(gè)標(biāo)準(zhǔn)。除了平時(shí)對(duì)書寫的練習(xí)之外，備課組還專門組織了一系列的活動(dòng)來(lái)激發(fā)學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)的熱情。在高二學(xué)年的時(shí)候，我們高二備課組組織了英語(yǔ)演講比賽和英語(yǔ)書法大賽。給學(xué)生發(fā)獎(jiǎng)品并大張旗鼓的表?yè)P(yáng)獲獎(jiǎng)學(xué)生，這些舉措都對(duì)學(xué)生規(guī)范性的提高和激發(fā)學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)的熱情起了很大的作用。
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