托福寫作考試：20171102雅思大作文

　　老人繼續(xù)工作：

　　1)豐富老人的生活

　　2)繼續(xù)為社會(huì)服務(wù)，發(fā)揮余熱

　　老人退休：

　　1)與年輕人搶就業(yè)機(jī)會(huì)，加劇社會(huì)的失業(yè)率

　　2)老年人身體條件變差，工作效率會(huì)降低，但同時(shí)老年人一般日積月累工資較高，對公司來說也是負(fù)擔(dān)

　　20171102雅思大作文題目：

　　Some people believe that it is a good idea to continue to work at their old age. Do you agree or disagree.

　　范文：

　　Thanks to the improvement of living standards and medical treatment, people today not only live longer but also have a better health condition. As for how to live happily after retirement, people have divergent opinions. Many senior citizens claim they would rather continue to work.

　　Admittedly, old people are supposed to get retired at certain age due to various reasons. What comes first is their health that to a large extent decides their work efficiency and effectiveness. Unavoidably, it is much easier for old people to suffer from fatigue and diseases. However, owing to their years of services, the company has to pay higher salaries, which is not cost effective. Moreover, the retirement of old people provides job opportunities for youngsters and curbs the growth of unemployment rate.

　　However, there are many old people in good physical condition expecting to work continuously at their old age. For them, the life after retirement is boring and meaningless. They are not satisfied with simply reading books, walking dogs, and gossiping with neighbors. The primary purpose for them to work is actually not for money but for a life full of sense of achievement and an opportunity to maintain the connection with society. They deserve job offers that allow them to keep making contribution to society. Compared with young people, they have more valuable work experience and commitment.

　　To sum up, although there are reasons for senior citizens to retire at certain age, it is much more meaningful for those who are healthy and willing to work continuously to keep working.

　　本文作者： Cindy(公眾號(hào)：英文寫作素材)

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