教你4個(gè)高分寫(xiě)作的秘訣
在雅思寫(xiě)作備考中,考生比較容易進(jìn)入的一個(gè)誤區(qū)就是“題海戰(zhàn)術(shù)”。到處收集作文題目,然后每天寫(xiě)2-3篇,以期寫(xiě)作水平在能在短期內(nèi)迅速提高。其實(shí)不然,適當(dāng)數(shù)量的寫(xiě)作實(shí)戰(zhàn)練習(xí)是必不可少的,但是并非批量生產(chǎn)、機(jī)械運(yùn)動(dòng)就有效。小編總結(jié)了四大寫(xiě)作高分經(jīng)驗(yàn)供廣大考生參考學(xué)習(xí),希望考生們可以從題目中以小見(jiàn)大、舉一反三。
雅思大作文備考--教你4個(gè)高分寫(xiě)作的秘訣
秘訣一:讓步(making concession)
讓步的論證是中國(guó)考生較陌生的一個(gè)概念,其實(shí)在學(xué)狀語(yǔ)從句時(shí),我們就學(xué)過(guò)讓步的關(guān)系,先退一步承認(rèn)一個(gè)與自己觀點(diǎn)相反的事實(shí),再轉(zhuǎn)折給出自己的觀點(diǎn),否定前者。句型如下:
Although/ though/ in spite of the fact that...…
As is granted/ Admittedly...…
Opponents would argue that...…
舉個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單的例子,一個(gè)男生向女生告白,被女生拒絕,她就會(huì)委婉的用讓步的論證來(lái)表達(dá)自己的想法,她會(huì)先承認(rèn)男生的一些優(yōu)點(diǎn),再轉(zhuǎn)折說(shuō)自己并不喜歡他。這 樣既能表達(dá)自己的觀點(diǎn),又不至于傷害對(duì)方。讓步這種方法的優(yōu)點(diǎn)為能較全面的看待一個(gè)問(wèn)題,而且反駁更能有的放矢。具體例子如下:
Eg. People don not believe that saving money is a good idea in modern society.
這個(gè)Topic sentence的觀點(diǎn)很明確,存錢在當(dāng)代社會(huì)不是好主意,顯然,用讓步論證的話,我們要先承認(rèn)存錢的優(yōu)點(diǎn),再根據(jù)所列有點(diǎn)進(jìn)行反駁。
As is granted, saving money offers people a sense of security in case of emergency. However, people tend to believe that wise investment can get more profits。
秘訣二:比較(contrast &comparison)
在雅思大寫(xiě)作中,考生可以拿相同或相反的事物做比較,相同關(guān)系叫對(duì)照(comparison),相反關(guān)系叫對(duì)比。此類論證我們重點(diǎn)掌握一些對(duì)比對(duì)照關(guān)系的連詞:
In contrast,by contrast,on the contrary,while,whereas
Likewise, similarly
秘訣三:列數(shù)據(jù)(raising figures)
句型:
As is reported/ investigated/ researched...…
It is reported that …...
A recent research conducted by...…Bureau reveals that…...
列數(shù)據(jù)的寫(xiě)作方法較講道理更有說(shuō)服力,但是這就需要我們?cè)谄綍r(shí)生活中多做積累才能應(yīng)付列舉考試中出現(xiàn)的各個(gè)話題的一些相關(guān)數(shù)字。
雅思考試中的數(shù)據(jù)其實(shí)可以分成兩大類,一類是有科學(xué)依據(jù)的,明確記載的數(shù)據(jù);另一類是指一些調(diào)查報(bào)告的數(shù)據(jù),如大學(xué)生平均一天花多少時(shí)間自習(xí),初中生平均一天花多少時(shí)間玩電腦游戲等,這類數(shù)據(jù)無(wú)據(jù)可依,考生完全可以自己根據(jù)論證內(nèi)容給出數(shù)據(jù),但一定要符合邏輯。我們通過(guò)一例來(lái)使用列數(shù)據(jù)的雅思寫(xiě)作方法:
Eg.The retired people tend to offer service for the benefits of the family and the community。
要對(duì)這樣一個(gè)topic sentence做列數(shù)據(jù)的擴(kuò)展,我們首先要找到可列數(shù)據(jù)的點(diǎn),此題有兩處,一是退休老人的年齡,二是所花時(shí)間。結(jié)合上述句型,得出論證過(guò)程如下:
As is reported, the average time that the retired within the age group above 65 spend on the family and the community is at its length of about 5 hours per day。
秘訣四:引用(quotation)
在雅思大作文寫(xiě)作論證的過(guò)程中,表達(dá)一些觀點(diǎn)的時(shí)候,如果能拿名人名言來(lái)進(jìn)行論證則更有說(shuō)服力,說(shuō)明某位名人的觀點(diǎn)和你的觀點(diǎn)是達(dá)成一致,形成共鳴的。但引用要求考生要有相當(dāng)大的積累,由于備考時(shí)間緊迫,此類論證可以少用。
小編特別提醒:引用名人名言就意味著引用別人的觀點(diǎn),所以只要引兩到三句起到論證自己觀點(diǎn)的作用的話就可以了,點(diǎn)到為止,而不是中文寫(xiě)作中,引用越多越好。
雅思大作文中的精彩范句
According to a recent survey,four-million people die each year from diseases linked to smoking.
依照最近的一項(xiàng)調(diào)查,每年有4,000,000人死于與吸煙相關(guān)的疾病。
The latest surveys show that Quiet a few children have unpleasant associations with homework.
最近的調(diào)查顯示相當(dāng)多的孩子對(duì)家庭作業(yè)沒(méi)什么好感。
No invention has received more praise and abuse than Internet.
沒(méi)有一項(xiàng)發(fā)明象互聯(lián)網(wǎng)同時(shí)受到如此多的贊揚(yáng)和批評(píng)。
People seem to fail to takesintosaccount the fact that education does not end with graduation.
人們似乎忽視了教育不應(yīng)該隨著畢業(yè)而結(jié)束這一事實(shí)。
Many experts point out that physical exercise contributes directly to a person’s physical fitness.
許多專家指出體育鍛煉直接有助于身體健康。
Nowadays ,many students always gosintosraptures at the mere mention of the coming life of high school or college they will begin.Unfortunately,for most young people,it is not pleasant experience on their first day on campus.
當(dāng)前,一提到即將開(kāi)始的學(xué)校生活,許多學(xué)生都會(huì)興高采烈。然而對(duì)多數(shù)年輕人來(lái)說(shuō),校園剛開(kāi)始的日子并不是什么愉快的經(jīng)歷。
In view of the seriousness of this problem,effective measures should be taken before things get worse.
考慮到問(wèn)題的嚴(yán)重性,在事態(tài)進(jìn)一步惡化之前,必須采取有效的措施。
proper measures must be taken to limit the number of foreign tourists and the great efforts should be made to protect local environment and history from the harmful effects of international tourism.
應(yīng)該采取適當(dāng)?shù)拇胧┫拗仆鈬?guó)旅游者的數(shù)量,努力保護(hù)當(dāng)?shù)丨h(huán)境和歷史不受國(guó)際旅游業(yè)的不利影響。
Many city residents complain that it is so few buses in their city that they have to spend much more time waiting for a bus,which is usually crowded with a large number of passengers.
許多市民抱怨城市的公交車太少,以至于他們要花很長(zhǎng)時(shí)間等一輛公交車,而車上可能已滿載乘客。
There is no denying the fact that air pollution is an extremely serious problem:the city authorities should take strong measures to deal with it.
無(wú)可否認(rèn),空氣污染是一個(gè)極其嚴(yán)重的問(wèn)題:城市當(dāng)局應(yīng)該采取有力措施來(lái)解決它。
An investigation shows that female workers tend to have a favorable attitude toward retirement.
一項(xiàng)調(diào)查顯示婦女歡迎退休。
a proper part-time job does not occupy student's too much time.In fact,it is unhealthy for them to spend all of time on their study.As an old saying goes:All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.
一份適當(dāng)?shù)臉I(yè)余工作并不會(huì)占用學(xué)生太多的時(shí)間,事實(shí)上,把全部的時(shí)間都用到學(xué)習(xí)上并不健康,正如那句老話:只工作,不玩耍,聰明的孩子會(huì)變傻。
Any government which is blind to this point may pay a heavy price.
任何政府忽視這一點(diǎn)都將付出巨大的代價(jià)。
An increasing number of people are beginning to realize that education is not complete with graduation.
越來(lái)越多的人開(kāi)始意識(shí)到教育不能隨著畢業(yè)而結(jié)束。
When it comes to education ,the majority of people believe that education is a lifetime study.
說(shuō)到教育,大部分人認(rèn)為其是一個(gè)終生的學(xué)習(xí)。
The majority of students believe that part-time job will provide them with more opportunities to develop their interpersonal skills ,which may put them in a favorable position in the future job markets.
大部分學(xué)生相信業(yè)余工作會(huì)使他們有更多機(jī)會(huì)發(fā)展人際交往能力,而這對(duì)他們未來(lái)找工作是非常有好處的。
It is indisputable that there are millions of people who still have a miserable life and have to fact the dangers of starvation and exposure.
無(wú)可爭(zhēng)辯,現(xiàn)在有成千上萬(wàn)的人仍過(guò)著挨餓受冬的痛苦生活。
Although this view is widely held,this is little evidence that education can be obtained at any age and at any place.
盡管這一觀點(diǎn)被廣泛接受,很少有證據(jù)表明教育能夠在任何地點(diǎn)任何年齡進(jìn)行。
No one can deny the fact that a person’s education is the most important aspect of his life.
沒(méi)有人能否人這一事實(shí):教育是人生最重要的一方面。
People equate success in life with the ability of operating computer.
人們把會(huì)使用計(jì)算機(jī)與人生成功相提并論。