高考英語滿分作文名師點(diǎn)評

　　下面是學(xué)習(xí)啦小編整理的高考英語滿分作文和名師點(diǎn)評，以供大家學(xué)習(xí)參考。

　　【全國卷I海南、寧夏】

　　【試題回放】假定你是李華，正在英國接受英語培訓(xùn)，住在一戶英國人家里。今天你的房東Mrs. Wilson 不在家，你準(zhǔn)備外出，請給Mrs. Wilson 寫一留言條，內(nèi)容包括：

　　1.外出購物

　　2.替房東還書

　　3.Tracy 來電話留言：1)咖啡屋(Bolton Coffee)見面取消

　　2)此事已告知Susan

　　3) 盡快回電

　　注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右;

　　2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

　　Mrs. Wilson,

　　I’m going out shopping, and won’t be back until about 5:00 pm. I have taken with me the two books you asked me to return to the City Library. At about 1 o’clock this afternoon, Tracy called, saying that she couldn’t meet you at Bolton Coffee tomorrow morning as she has something important to attend to. She felt very sorry about that, but said that you could set some other time for the meeting. She wanted you to call her back as soon as you are home. She has already told Susan about this change.

　　Yours,

　　Li Hua

　　[名師點(diǎn)評]

　　本文屬于提綱式要點(diǎn)作文，是學(xué)生比較熟悉的題材，體現(xiàn)了英語學(xué)習(xí)應(yīng)該注意實用性，生活型的原則。行文人稱、時態(tài)運(yùn)用恰當(dāng)、準(zhǔn)確，各個要點(diǎn)間邏輯連貫，行文通順。提綱類書面表達(dá)不是簡單的逐條翻譯，而是將所給的幾個要點(diǎn)合理的組成比較通順的語句，因此要仔細(xì)組織語言，合理安排結(jié)構(gòu)。在語言方面，要特別注意簡潔明了，開頭要開門見山。

　　【江蘇卷】

　　【試題回放】鼠標(biāo)是計算機(jī)時代最佳的人機(jī)交互工具之一。它極大地方便了人們的計算機(jī)操作。但是，過分依賴鼠標(biāo)的習(xí)慣也會帶來一些不利影響。請你以鼠標(biāo)為切入點(diǎn)，根據(jù)下表所提示的信息，用英語寫一篇短文。

　　鼠標(biāo)的必要性對多數(shù)人來說，操作計算機(jī)，上網(wǎng)沖浪……

　　鼠標(biāo)的便捷性點(diǎn)擊、移動、插入、拷貝、刪除……編輯文本，搜索信息……

　　收發(fā)郵件，選購商品……

　　點(diǎn)播音樂，下載電影……

　　如果過分依賴鼠標(biāo)…… (請考生結(jié)合自身感受，列舉兩到三點(diǎn))

　　注意：

　　1.對所給要點(diǎn)逐一陳述，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，不要簡單翻譯。

　　2.詞數(shù)150左右。開頭已經(jīng)寫好，不計人總詞數(shù)。

　　3.作文中不得提及考生所在學(xué)校和本人姓名。

　　The mouse is a most effective device used by people to communicate with a computer.

　　For most people, it’s almost impossible to operate a computer without a mouse, let alone surf the Internet. A well-chosen mouse is really handy, flexible and convenient in controlling the screen. With the functions of inserting, deleting, moving and copying, it enables us to edit test, browse web page and download what we want. It can even bring us a flood of music, movies and PC games. Just imagine, all this can be done with a cute mouse.

　　A convenient tool can certainly make our work easier, but it doesn’t always help in a positive way. Too much ready information on our fingertips leaves little room for knowledge pursuing. Too many ready answers make us less excited in finding truth. Relying too much on mouse clicking makes us lazier and less creative both mentally and physically.