如何寫(xiě)出英語(yǔ)高分作文

　　英語(yǔ)作文是一項(xiàng)綜合能力的考試，主要是考學(xué)生對(duì)詞匯、語(yǔ)法和句子結(jié)構(gòu)以及連句成文的掌握程度。筆者認(rèn)為，要想讓學(xué)生在規(guī)定的30分鐘內(nèi)寫(xiě)出一篇較好的作文，教師應(yīng)該在平時(shí)的課堂教學(xué)中認(rèn)真指導(dǎo)學(xué)生注重審題、切題、連貫通順、語(yǔ)法正確、語(yǔ)言規(guī)范這五個(gè)環(huán)節(jié)。本文旨在談?wù)勗趯?xiě)出英語(yǔ)高分作文這個(gè)方面的具體作法。

　　如何寫(xiě)出英語(yǔ)高分作文

　　一、寫(xiě)作訣竅

　　總體把握，要點(diǎn)齊全;人稱(chēng)時(shí)態(tài)，邏輯清楚;

　　關(guān)鍵詞匯，動(dòng)詞第一;組詞成句，結(jié)構(gòu)完整;

　　組句成文，連詞增色;此路不通，繞道迂回;

　　字跡工整，留好印象;從句適量，高分有望。

　　二、寫(xiě)作步驟

　　1.認(rèn)真審題。審題包括要點(diǎn)、格式、詞數(shù)以及此篇文章要傳遞給讀者什么樣的信息，告誡讀者什么(即寫(xiě)作目的)。

　　2.確定文體和時(shí)態(tài)。確定文體后，根據(jù)不同文體的特點(diǎn)和要求進(jìn)行組織材料;同時(shí)確定出該篇文章的總時(shí)態(tài)與時(shí)態(tài)的變化。

　　3.寫(xiě)完要點(diǎn)，但不隨意發(fā)揮。

　　4.先草稿，后抄寫(xiě)。

　　三、習(xí)作點(diǎn)評(píng)

　　[2004年全國(guó)中學(xué)生英語(yǔ)能力競(jìng)賽初賽初三組] (14分)

　　Choose one of your hobbies and write an article for the school magazine about it. tell the magazine readers.

　　﹒what exactly your hobby is;

　　﹒when and how you became interested in this hobby;

　　﹒why you enjoy your hobby;

　　﹒about your hopes and plans for the future.

　　寫(xiě)作要求：

　　1. 根據(jù)所提供的內(nèi)容，適當(dāng)拓展想象空間，靈活地將提供的信息體現(xiàn)在文章中。

　　2. 條理清楚，語(yǔ)句通順，書(shū)寫(xiě)清晰、規(guī)范。

　　3. 詞數(shù)60-80。

　　[學(xué)生習(xí)作a]

　　My hobby is read books. when i was seven years old .

　　I became interested in reading books. I like needing books

　　Because there are a lot of useful things in books. I can learn

　　a lot of knowledge from books. Books also can teach me

　　how to be a good person . Books even can solve many

　　problems for me . I will read more good books to improve

　　myself.

　　①改為reading books，動(dòng)詞作表語(yǔ)時(shí)應(yīng)該用動(dòng)名詞。

　　②also的位置應(yīng)放在can之后。

　　[點(diǎn)評(píng)]：檔次9-11分。

　?、僖c(diǎn)不全，漏掉最后一個(gè)要點(diǎn)。

　?、诰渥踊緹o(wú)誤，能正確傳遞信息給讀者但文章不流暢，句子與句子之間過(guò)渡不自然，給讀者感覺(jué)在回答上述① ② ③問(wèn)題。

　?、塾猩倭垮e(cuò)誤。

　　[學(xué)生習(xí)作b]

　　My hobby is reading .reading books is very enjoyable .

　　When I was young, my mother used to tell me a story before

　　I went to bed every night .the stories were so interesting

　　that I always felt they weren't enough . So I began to read

　　books by myself .little by little I became interested in

　　reading . I can learn much knowledge and many interesting

　　things all over the world .when I read books , I can enjoy the

　　beautiful sentences . At the same time I can improve my

　　writing . I want to be a writer in the future, so I must study

　　hard and read more books so that my dream can come true .