盤點(diǎn)雅思寫作大作文中要注意的點(diǎn)
雅思大作文要注意些什么呢?下面小編給大家分享一下,希望可以幫助到你們。
雅思大作文的寫作方法及注意事項(xiàng)
語句、詞語。文章由語句組成,語句由詞語組成。在著手寫文章之前,應(yīng)該提示自己留意下面幾點(diǎn)
1)語句與詞語的正確用法。這是最基本的一點(diǎn)。這兒包含單字的正確拼寫、詞語在特定語句中的正確應(yīng)用、正確的語句模式。留意:千萬不要在文章中呈現(xiàn)中國式的英語。這就要求在構(gòu)思的時(shí)分不要用中文進(jìn)行考慮,寫的時(shí)分要細(xì)心酌量文章的語句。
2)語句的多樣化。這點(diǎn)的完成必須在語句與詞語的正確上來完成。語句的多樣化是表現(xiàn)一個(gè)人英語言語水平的要害也是使文章獲得高分的重點(diǎn)。如非謂語從句、定語從句、賓語從句等,以及簡(jiǎn)單句、雜亂句的歸納運(yùn)用。
3)標(biāo)點(diǎn)的正確運(yùn)用
文章的全體風(fēng)格與氣氛。
作為考官或許是閱讀你文章的人,在第一次接觸到你文章時(shí)就能夠感受到文章的特色與風(fēng)格,或許生動(dòng)或許呆板,而根據(jù)模板寫的文章很難做到生動(dòng)或許是吸引讀者。
堅(jiān)持書寫的整齊性與筆跡
常見過錯(cuò)提示
一. 紛歧致(disagreements)
所謂紛歧致不光指主謂紛歧致,它還包含了數(shù)的紛歧致 時(shí)態(tài)紛歧致及代詞紛歧 致等.
例1. when one have money ,he can do what he want to .
(人一旦有了錢,他就能想干什么就干什么.)
分析:one是單數(shù)第三人稱,因此本句的have應(yīng)改為has ;同理,want應(yīng)改為wants.本句是典型的主謂紛歧致.
改為: once one has money ,he can do what he wants (to do)
二. 修飾語錯(cuò)位(misplaced modifiers)
英語與漢語不同,同一個(gè)修飾語置于語句不同的方位,語句的意義可能引起改變.關(guān)于這一點(diǎn)中國學(xué)生往往沒有引起滿足的重視,因此造成了不必要的誤解. 例1. i believe i can do it well and i will better know the world outside the campus.
分析:better方位不妥,應(yīng)置于句末.
三. 語句不完好(sentence fragments)
在白話中,外交雙方可憑借手勢(shì)口氣上下文等,不完好的語句完全能夠被了解.可是書面語就不同了,語句結(jié)構(gòu)不完好會(huì)令意思表達(dá)不清,這種狀況常常發(fā)作在主句寫完今后,筆者又想加些彌補(bǔ)闡明時(shí)發(fā)作.
例1. there are many ways to know the society. for example by tv ,radio ,newspaper and so on .
分析:本句后半部分"for example by tv ,radio ,newspaper and so on .”不是一個(gè)完好的語句,僅為一些不連貫的詞語,不能獨(dú)立成句.
改為:there are many ways to know society ,for example ,by tv ,radio ,and newspaper.
四. 懸垂修飾語(dangling modifiers)
所謂懸垂修飾語是指句首的短語與后邊語句的邏輯關(guān)系紊亂不清.例如:at the age of ten, my grandfather died. 這句中"at the age of ten"只點(diǎn)出十歲時(shí),但沒有闡明” 誰”十歲時(shí).按一般推理不可能是my grandfather, 假如咱們把這個(gè)懸垂修飾語改清晰一點(diǎn),全句就不那么費(fèi)解了.
改為:
when i was ten, my grandfather died.
例1. to do well in college, good grades are essential.
分析:句中不定式短語 “to do well in college” 的邏輯主語不清楚.
改為:
to do well in college, a student needs good grades.
五. 詞性誤用(misuse of parts of speech)
“詞性誤用”常表現(xiàn)為:介詞當(dāng)動(dòng)詞用;形容詞當(dāng)副詞用;名詞當(dāng)動(dòng)詞用等.
例1. none can negative the importance of money.
分析:negative 系形容詞,誤作動(dòng)詞。
改為:
none can deny the importance of money.
六. 指代不清(ambiguous reference of pronouns)
指代不清首要講的是代詞與被指代的人或物關(guān)系不清,或許先后所用的代詞紛歧致。試看下面這一句:
mary was friendly to my sister because she wanted her to be her bridesmaid.
(瑪麗和我姐姐很要好,由于她要她做她的伴娘。)
讀完上面這一句話,讀者無法清晰地判別兩位姑娘中誰將成婚,誰將當(dāng)伴娘。假如咱們把易于引起誤解的代詞的所指對(duì)象加以清晰,意思就一望而知了。這個(gè)語句可改為:
mary was friendly to my sister because she wanted my sister to be her bridesmaid.
例1. and we can also know the society by serving it yourself.
分析:句中人稱代詞we 和反身代詞yourself指代紛歧致。改為:
we can also know society by serving it ourselves.
七. 不間斷語句(run-on sentences)
什么叫run-on sentence?請(qǐng)看下面的例句。
例1. there are many ways we get to know the outside world.
分析:這個(gè)語句包含了兩層完好的意思:“there are many ways.” 以及“we get to know the outside world.”。簡(jiǎn)單地把它們連在一起就不妥當(dāng)了。
改為:
there are many ways for us to learn about the outside world. 或:
there are many ways through which we can become acquainted with the outside
world
八. 措詞缺點(diǎn)(troubles in diction)
diction 是指在特定的語句中怎么適當(dāng)?shù)剡x用詞語的問題,囿于教育時(shí)刻急迫,教師平常在這方面花的時(shí)刻往往極端有限,影響了學(xué)生在寫作中沒有養(yǎng)成杰出的琢磨,酌量的習(xí)氣。他們往往為所欲為,拿來就用。所以作文中用詞不妥的過錯(cuò)舉目皆是。
例1. the increasing use of chemical obstacles in agriculture also makes pollution.
(農(nóng)業(yè)方面化學(xué)物質(zhì)運(yùn)用的不斷添加也造成了污染。)
分析:明顯,考生把obstacles“障礙”,“障礙物”誤作substance“物質(zhì)”了。別的“the increasing use (不斷添加的運(yùn)用)” 應(yīng)改為“abusive use (亂用)”。
改為:
the abusive use of chemical substances in agriculture also causes/leads to pollution.
九. 負(fù)擔(dān)(redundancy)
言以簡(jiǎn)練為貴。寫語句沒有一個(gè)剩余的詞;寫階段沒有一個(gè)無必要的語句。能用單詞的不必詞組;能用詞組的不必從句或語句。如:
in spite of the fact that he is lazy, i like him.
本句的“the fact that he is lazy”系同謂語從句,咱們按照上述“能用詞組的不必從句”能夠改為:in spite of his laziness, i like him.
例1. for the people who are diligent and kind, money is just the thing to be used to buy the thing they need.
分析:整個(gè)語句能夠大大簡(jiǎn)化。
改為:
diligent, caring people use money only to buy what they need.
十. 不連貫(incoherence)
不連貫是指一個(gè)語句前言不對(duì)后語,或是結(jié)構(gòu)上不疏通。這也是考生常犯的缺點(diǎn)。
例1. the fresh water, it is the most important things of the earth.
分析:the fresh water 與逗號(hào)后的it 不連貫。it 與things 在數(shù)方面紛歧致。
常見聯(lián)詞
表層進(jìn)
first, firstly to begin with/second, secondly to start with/third, thirdly what's more/also and then/and equally important/besides in addition/further in the first place/still furthermore
last but not the least/next besides/too moreover/finally
表舉例
for example for instance/to illustrate as an illustration/after all/表解說/as a matter of fact/frankly speaking/in this case namely/in other words
in summary in a word/in brief in conclusion/to conclude in fact/indeed in short/in other words /of course/it is true specially/namely in all/that is to summarize/thus as has been said/altogether in other words/finally in simpler terms/in particular that is/on the whole to put it differently/therefore
表著重
of course indeed/above all most important/emphasis certainly in fact
表退讓
still nevertheless/in spite of all the same/even so after all/concession granted naturally/of course
表比較
in comparison likewise/similarly equally/however likewise/in the same way/
表轉(zhuǎn)機(jī)
by contrast although/e same time but/in contrast nevertheless/notwithstanding on the contrary
on the other hand otherwise/regardless still/though yet/despite the fact that even so/even though for all that/however in spite of/instead
表時(shí)刻
after a while afterward/again also/and then as long as/at last at length/at that time before/besides earlier/eventually finally/formerly further/furthermore in addition/in the first place in the past/
last lately/meanwhile moreover/next now/presently second/shortly simultaneously/since so far/soon still/subsequently then/thereafter too/until until now/when
雅思寫作五大必知注意事項(xiàng)
1.注意把握時(shí)間
雅思寫作要求考生在一個(gè)小時(shí)之內(nèi)完成一篇至少150個(gè)單詞的說明文或信件(20分鐘)和一篇至少250個(gè)單詞的議論文(40分鐘)??忌韬侠戆才艜r(shí)間。小站教育建議大家先簡(jiǎn)后難,先做Task 1,并且Task 1盡量控制在20分鐘內(nèi)完成,然后再寫Task 2。所以考生在考前一定要多練多寫,掌握時(shí)間。
2.注意把控字?jǐn)?shù)
雖然雅思寫作考試,對(duì)于作文字?jǐn)?shù)沒有上限要求,但有下限要求。首先,同學(xué)們的注意字?jǐn)?shù)不能過少,但同時(shí)也要注意字?jǐn)?shù)不要過多。據(jù)統(tǒng)計(jì)看來,大多數(shù)的高分小作文字?jǐn)?shù)都在180左右,而大作文也在280左右。就Task 1 而言,說明該考生對(duì)圖表的分析能力還有待提高,多練習(xí)看圖審題構(gòu)思。如果Task 2字?jǐn)?shù)不夠,說明同學(xué)們思路不開闊,論據(jù)無法擴(kuò)展,考生需增加閱讀量,多看和雅思寫作話題相近的文章和精讀雅思范文來掌握論據(jù)擴(kuò)展方法。
3.注意格式及卷面整潔
首先同學(xué)們要明白,雅思大小作文是不需要題目。雅思寫作有兩種格式:一是空行不空格式,即文章每段開頭頂格寫,段與段之間空一行;二是空格不空行,即除首段頂格外,文章每段開頭空五個(gè)字符,段與段之間不空行。事實(shí)證明,潦草的字跡和不整潔的卷面將在一定程度上影響考官理解文章內(nèi)容,從而影響得分。因此大家在寫作過程中,注意保持卷面整潔。
4.注意時(shí)態(tài)
在雅思小作文中,經(jīng)常會(huì)出現(xiàn)圖標(biāo)類的作文。圖表作文通常會(huì)給出特定的時(shí)間,同學(xué)們要根據(jù)此時(shí)間決定文章的時(shí)態(tài)。通常情況下有以下三種情況:過去時(shí)間用一般過去式,現(xiàn)在時(shí)間或沒給出時(shí)間用一般現(xiàn)在式,預(yù)測(cè)用一般將來式。議論文根據(jù)內(nèi)容確定時(shí)態(tài)。
5.注意靈活運(yùn)用機(jī)經(jīng)及模板
雅思考試是一種非常系統(tǒng)、嚴(yán)格、專業(yè)的語言水平測(cè)試。有著龐大的題庫,有些題目也會(huì)重復(fù)出現(xiàn),所以同學(xué)們可以通過了解以往考題,即機(jī)經(jīng)充分把握寫作題型、話題等,為考試做好充分準(zhǔn)備。背范文對(duì)提高同學(xué)們的語言水平有很大幫助,但大家要明確背范文的目的是吸收其中的精華,如觀點(diǎn)、語言、結(jié)構(gòu)等,而不是在考試時(shí)遇到相同題目全盤照搬。一旦被考官發(fā)現(xiàn),可想而知最后的得分就不會(huì)高。
雅思大作文注意事項(xiàng)
一、雅思大作文開頭:
開頭要短小;要有立場(chǎng)和觀點(diǎn);避免模板。
如:Should the amount of advertising on TV be increased or decreased?
Nowadays many people discuss whether we need …or not.
Now whether…. has become a very hot debate in society.
As far as this topic is concerned, different people have different opinions. Some people think that ……Others believe that …... I think both views have their reasons.
Recently the ... has been brought into focus ... Nowhere in history has the issue been more visible. In this essay, I aim to explore this complicated phenomenon from diverse perspectives, identify the relevant contributing factors and bring up some effective measures.
二、雅思大作文結(jié)構(gòu):
一個(gè)paragraph一個(gè)idea;避免過多examples, esp personal examples.;段落間的平衡
三、雅思大作文語言:
避免idioms, famous sayings
避免poetic language
Explain your point…then explain it again in a different way
Use “a mix of longer and short sentences”
雅思大作文評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)
考官將從以下方面對(duì)作文進(jìn)行評(píng)分:
1.對(duì)寫作任務(wù)的反應(yīng):考生能否完整地、以恰當(dāng)?shù)姆绞酵瓿深}目中提出的寫作任務(wù);考生的論點(diǎn)是否切中題目的要求、論證過程是否完整、論點(diǎn)是否得到了論據(jù)的支持;考生的觀點(diǎn)是否清晰和有效;
2.連貫性和結(jié)構(gòu)層次:考生能否將信息和要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行組織(如運(yùn)用分段的能力)、信息和要點(diǎn)之間的聯(lián)系是否清晰;
3.詞匯來源:考生使用的詞匯是否廣泛、準(zhǔn)確、且適合這一部分寫作的要求;
4.語法的多樣性和準(zhǔn)確性:考生使用的語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否多樣、準(zhǔn)確、且適合這一部分寫作的要求。
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